Awesome, and yet..
It was great, the animation and voice acting were quite good, humor was also amazing. Yet I can't get myself to believe this took almost 2 years to make.
Outstanding, as always.
I have always thought your seires was amazing, and every episode just gets better and better.
The animation is smooth and fluid, the storyline and script are brilliant, the voice acting and music selection are awesome!
Thanks for another great episode, Victor. ^^
It's simply amazing, the song is really awesome, the animating, different styles were flawless and the way you did it really fit the song, not to mention all the memories this flash brings back, it really shows how awesome is Newgrounds, and to people like me, who aren't quite new to Newgrounds, this flash really does bring back so much memories, it shoes the tallents of the artists here, old and new, which is quite stuning. It shows that Newgrounds really is "Everything by Everyone" and makes us all remember that Flash is art.
oh and people, he said FIRST SUBMISSION, not first try so uum... ya iil let you all get back to your lives now XD
anyway... back to the point:
no matter if this is first submission or even first try in flash(probably IMPOSSIBLE!), as people here say, you have some real talent, you should try and make a movie(id like to see more serious stuff on newgrounds XD, dont take this wrong people, i like funny stuff too but HELL, too much funny is just too much, dontcha think?), anyway, whatever you make, ur good. in the near future i guess youll have ALOT of fans, but animating isnt everything, theres story, music, art and animating(which you pretty much control XD) and originallity... i guess that you will be a great flash artist one day, even though im a flash noob, i just gotta say the next line, Remember, Flash Is Art... one tip which most popular flash artists know about is, even if people try to speed you up(in ANY way), dont give up, take as much time as you need, cus in the time ive been in newgrounds, ive learned that speeded flashes suck(well MOST of them XD).
a flash noob and pretty much long time in newgrounds uuh... guy
love your flashes :D ur pretty good, its nice to know there are AT LEAST a few spriters left lol, lately all spriters are A) quitting most of their most aewsome sprite movies cus they got bored of them t.t OR B) gone LOL
oh to the guy below me, UR rubbish, not only that these sprites are the best he has cus most naruto games are 3D fighting games and who cares if the sonic universe and naruto universe have nothing to do with each other! its like Super Smash Bros. Brawl, WHAT THE HELL DOES THE LINK, KIRBY, SONIC AND MARIO UNIVERSES HAVE TO DO WITH EACH OTHER!? HUH HUH TELL ME!! and back to my point, awesome flashes Mini-Speed XD
lol, great just like always :D anyway... dumb frog :P couldnt he see that its a human o.O too bad, it kinda make me miss domo XD anyway... to the rating!
P.S.: well i know what u mean about this being a fave, i like this one too :D
well i see u learned from the few mistakes of the first one lol, youve really improved and fixed most of the things that needed fixing XD well the improvement is sweet so u get a 10, 5 and fav XD
thx, my trailer was good for my first flash and then ep 1 just went down hill. but ep 2 is better then both of them.
Great flash, the sound wasnt that much of a problem.
Wow I wish I had that kind of pot.
Banana Sword rox lol
really good, but i dont have CC and i suck at flash, but im good at hand drawings, if u want iil even send u my first CC draw :D its a great guide, very detailed and inspiring lol
P.S.: the first CC draw is from this guide, finished it 2 mins ago lol
Cool! Yeah! Sure, send me it whenever, i would love to see it! Thanks for the review! My Msn addy is firstname.lastname@example.org
you need to work out on some things like:
1.music, one of the most important stuff in flash
2.speed, the movie is kinda slow, speeding it up a little would have helped
3.movements, which also has a little thing to do with speed but lets say uhh, while they talk, nothing barely moves, which makes the movie a little bit boring cus people wanna see the fight but then -PAUSE- the character talks and u have to wait instead seeing the fight or whatever
sorry but thats what i think u should improve cus the story and stuff is good, its just those 3 things that if they wouldve been better i would give u a ten...
ep 2 is out now so check that one out
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